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自考英语二满分作文范文专题研究专业串讲笔记

时间:2020-12-28 11:12来源:重庆自考网助学中心 字体大小:【


【题目要求】

假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:

1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。

注意:

1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.结束语已为你写好。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Yours,Li Hua

【写作解析】

这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型,可以按照申请信的思路来写,同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。

首先要进行自我介绍,简要交代写作背景,阐明写信目的。

第二段是文章的主题,要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来,文章用First of all,What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。

最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。



【题目要求】

假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:

1. 时间;

2. 活动安排;

3. 欢迎他表演节目。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件,告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。

首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的,之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息,最后欢迎他表演节目。

第二,根据提纲,确定关键词语,如:How is everything going? a music festival,in the school hall,The opening ceremony等。

第三,注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。

【点评】

本文内容完整,详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如:You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival. 定语从句。提升了文章档次。



【题目要求】

Directions: Write an English compositionin 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.

上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所〔博物馆还是社区图书馆〕征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:

1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2.说明你的理由〔从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比〕

【优秀范芬范文】

To whom it may concern:

I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

WangMin

【点睛】

本作文考查观点论述,题型较为常见,要求对画展的展出场所做出选择,并且说明理由,而且已经提示了可以从便利性和专业性两个角度来分析,难度不算太大,要写好这篇作文,只要观点明确并且言之有理即可。

范文按照书信的形式,首先要提出给收信人,Towhomitmayconcern这里表示的是敬启者,是在读者身份不明时用在信件、通知和证明书开头的套语,也是除了Dearxxx之外英语书信的常见用语。

信的第一段交待了自己的身份,并且说明了些这封信的目的。

第二段明确提出了自己的观点,用了itismoreadvisabletodo...句型,说明“……是更合理的”,常用在提出建议时。段落最后用Myreasonsareasfollows.“我的理由如下”作为一个过渡句引出下面的理由论述。

第【三】四段用ononehand...ontheotherhand...“一方面……;另一方面……”进行连接,层次清楚。在论述观点时连词的使用可以使逻辑显得更清晰。第三段从便利性角度进行分析,博物馆交通更便利而且环境更舒适,其中用到了which引导的非限定性定语从句。第四段从专业性角度说明博物馆的优势。

最后一段用therefore简单总结并重申自己的观点。

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